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rubia_flame, January 29th, 2008, 6:10 pm


What's my excuse for this page's ugliness? xD Good question... I'm sick currently and and the drawings are almost forced. v_v I can actually tell at what stage of my sickness I drew everything... and that just GROSS. So. The end result is icky and I will go die in bed now. *SIGH* just glad I could even do an update together.




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CPD, January 29th, 2008, 6:13 pm


Ha! She got jipped.

Get well soon!


Cho (Guest), January 29th, 2008, 7:45 pm


Feel better soon <333

PS, the page doesnt look bad at all. :3


Kurayami, January 29th, 2008, 10:19 pm


Lol oh Drake you silly boy! I want to dance too! *can't dance to save my life* X3 My daddy is um... wealthy! What he is? Kinda...

Oh noz! D= Feel better! X3 I'm sick too, but not really sick. Still going to school and such!
Your drawing do not suck! D<


yo some crit (Guest), January 29th, 2008, 11:43 pm


just a comment - word censoring may be all and well for the little kiddies, but i imagine anyone with half a brain can compute the equation sh*t=shit, or f#ck=fuck ;d

either you change the insults to something safer and more...acceptable :| like moron or something lolwtf, or you just say dipshit or etc.

it's just a tip...it makes your comic look unprofessional. well... so does comic sans, actually :| and the emo hair/INVISIBLE TRANSPERANCY HAIR is also just retarded and animu, don't do it. it's fail. i doubt if you had a hairstyle like that, your eyebrows and every single detail would show through.


and too much toning/messy lineart. this comic could use a looooot of improvement. but hey, you don't gotta listen, right?


rubia_flame, January 29th, 2008, 11:56 pm


Sorry you were so disappointed with it? O_O *doesn't even know how to respond* I'm not going for a totally professional look, in all honesty this is my first comic and it's something I enjoy to do. I don't want to do the classic manga comic look like everyone does, nor do I want to go for a western style action comic. I draw in my own style, and as much as I know people hate the eyes/eyebrows showing through the hair effect I have heard the comment before. Yet I find hit helps emphasize the expressions more and allows less restrictions with the hair style of a character which I feel expresses their personality.

As for the word censoring, I do it for my own shits and giggles, that's why the comic is pg 13 currently, and not for everyone.

As for the toning, it's not something I want to change, I will admit to the fact the lineart gets messy from time to time, but that's most due to the fact that I get tired with a page, or I wasn't to spend 30 hours making clean lines. As for your skills on giving feedback... guest? I can only say one thing, thank you for the input, I will keep it in mind but I suggest actually saying something NICE about a comic if you want anyone to listen to your advice.


Midnitergrl, January 30th, 2008, 9:57 am


I always thought the invisible hair was cool...o_0 I LIKE seeing their expressions. If their hair wasn't see through I wouldn't be able to do that, right?

I hope you feel better!!
Ps. It's spelled "Clothes".


i like your people (Guest), February 20th, 2008, 12:07 am


that is, i like the way you draw people. its kind of like semi-realistic and semi-cartoon. i read another webcomic thats drawn kind of like this and i think its really cool, and the transparent hair as well, because if a charrie has hair over their eyes and you don't do the hair all transparent an' stuff, then it doesn't work very well. yeah....i love your comic and its really awesome! ^^;


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